haiku
Last night I stayed at the new Hotel Indigo in dtwn Chicago and the whole place is filled with haiku poems. They get you thinking. If you are not familair, the Haiku-poems consist of respectively 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units and can describe almost anything, but you seldom find themes which are too complicated. Some of the most thrilling Haiku-poems describe daily situations in a way that gives the reader a brand new experience of a well-known situation.
So here's mine:
weight loss surgery
changing my life everyday
soon I will be thin
What's your haiku?
Allison_R
on 4/13/06 12:41 pm - Lansing, MI
on 4/13/06 12:41 pm - Lansing, MI
How about this one.....
Brand new size 12 jeans
Goodbye to my old "fat" pants
I love losing weight
This was fun. What a great idea!
Crap, now I'm addicted and thinking ofmore haikus, and I'm sitting here counting out syllables on my fingers. For the record, the last haiku I wrote was in eighth grade English class


