haiku

Ms T.
on 4/13/06 6:22 am - Northern Chicagoland, IL
Last night I stayed at the new Hotel Indigo in dtwn Chicago and the whole place is filled with haiku poems. They get you thinking. If you are not familair, the Haiku-poems consist of respectively 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units and can describe almost anything, but you seldom find themes which are too complicated. Some of the most thrilling Haiku-poems describe daily situations in a way that gives the reader a brand new experience of a well-known situation. So here's mine: weight loss surgery changing my life everyday soon I will be thin What's your haiku?
Alejandro Gonzalez
on 4/13/06 6:29 am - Zapopan, Mexico
Sorry Tiffany not enough English from me!!! Alejandro from Guadalajara Mexico
Ms T.
on 4/13/06 6:40 am - Northern Chicagoland, IL
you almost have it.... Sorry Tiffany not enough English from me!!! from Guadalajara
Alejandro Gonzalez
on 4/13/06 6:55 am - Zapopan, Mexico
lakergirl
on 4/13/06 6:57 am - South Pasadena, CA
Here's my shot at it: I see my shadow and I think who is that girl my soul is changing Cute idea Tiffany! Beth
Dawn G.
on 4/13/06 7:15 am - NJ
Can a dream come true? I am living it right now Praise Gastric Bypass Dawn
sergiocathy
on 4/13/06 10:11 am - Sunny, CA
want Boca burgers have them every day protein and yummy perhaps not thrilling for the gentle reader, but Boca burgers do make my little heart sing! Cathy
Allison_R
on 4/13/06 12:41 pm - Lansing, MI
How about this one..... Brand new size 12 jeans Goodbye to my old "fat" pants I love losing weight This was fun. What a great idea! Crap, now I'm addicted and thinking ofmore haikus, and I'm sitting here counting out syllables on my fingers. For the record, the last haiku I wrote was in eighth grade English class
Nancy B
on 4/14/06 6:38 am - Niagara-on-the-Lake, Canada
I woke up, amazed- Where did I find these thin wrists Are they really mine? Nancy B
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